ext_28232: (eh?)
ext_28232 ([identity profile] dagronrat.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] soc_puppet 2006-07-28 09:45 pm (UTC)

Yes, make the questions siller. By heavy reading I meant it feels very serious and plot like and descriptive, not funny what... :cD;;

"Kosher"? :c? But yeah, I think I guess what you mean. But how else can one translate the idea of an avalanche of questions without forcing the questions upon the readers?

Perhaps have Mr. Gorilla try and interrupt and Hakuba tell him not to, to listen seriously?

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