- There, relied on his father's status as Metropolitan Chief of Police to get officers with more experience (but less observatory power) to listen to him. I think there's a "He" missing. Am also tempted to put "Observational skill(s)" or "brain power"(although the latter's just mean.)
- All good I think. Although the "flirts badly" line seemed more powerful to me without the fan-club mention.
- did you put that he's a Sherlock Holmes geek that goes around in a deerstalker? :cD;;
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Date: 2006-07-29 03:26 am (UTC)I think there's a "He" missing. Am also tempted to put "Observational skill(s)" or "brain power"(although the latter's just mean.)
- All good I think. Although the "flirts badly" line seemed more powerful to me without the fan-club mention.
- did you put that he's a Sherlock Holmes geek that goes around in a deerstalker? :cD;;