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soc_puppetWow, it's been a while o_o. Third sceene of that Furuba/Saiyuki crossover (which I have decided to call "Uncertain Smoothie", I think ^_^). First two sceenes and basic fic info can be found here. This sceene features the first actual appearance of a Saiyuki character ^^v, so it is now officially a crossover!
Still all diologue. Still getting used to letting the characters tell the story for me, but I think it will be a good excersize for me. Anyway, fic time:
Fic: Uncertain Smoothie: Sceene Three
"Wow! It's so big!"
"Around a hundred people live in the outer area. Fifty live in the main house."
"Really, Shigure-san?"
"...Tell me again why she's coming."
"Because she was invited, Kyonkichi!"
"/.../"
"Oi! Yuki-kun! Kyo-kun! Shigure-san!"
"Goku-kun! Good to see you again."
"Hey, who's the girl?"
"Eh?"
"Oi! Goku, you idiot! Back off of Tohru-kun already. You don't wanna transform, do you?"
"Jeez, you don't have to get so touchy about it. I just wanted to see what she was like, is all."
Yeah, right.
"No, no, it's fine! I don't mind, really! And-! And-! And-! Transform? Does that mean...?"
*sigh* "Yes, Honda-san, Goku-kun is one of the Zodiac."
"Ah! Pleased to meet you, Goku-san!"
"Eh? Where'd you find her? ...Ow, hey, don't hit me! I was just curious! Geez... Anyway, Hakkai's waiting, so let's get going. ...Oh, Tohru-kun?"
"Yes, Goku-san?"
"You got anything to eat? Hey, I said don't hit! Ow!"
--TBC--
Um, yes ^^; Again, hope things were clear enough here.
Also, wow, anacro-tastic! Mmm-mm, just love those timeline inconsistancies.
Feedback appreciated.
Still all diologue. Still getting used to letting the characters tell the story for me, but I think it will be a good excersize for me. Anyway, fic time:
Fic: Uncertain Smoothie: Sceene Three
"Wow! It's so big!"
"Around a hundred people live in the outer area. Fifty live in the main house."
"Really, Shigure-san?"
"...Tell me again why she's coming."
"Because she was invited, Kyonkichi!"
"/.../"
"Oi! Yuki-kun! Kyo-kun! Shigure-san!"
"Goku-kun! Good to see you again."
"Hey, who's the girl?"
"Eh?"
"Oi! Goku, you idiot! Back off of Tohru-kun already. You don't wanna transform, do you?"
"Jeez, you don't have to get so touchy about it. I just wanted to see what she was like, is all."
Yeah, right.
"No, no, it's fine! I don't mind, really! And-! And-! And-! Transform? Does that mean...?"
*sigh* "Yes, Honda-san, Goku-kun is one of the Zodiac."
"Ah! Pleased to meet you, Goku-san!"
"Eh? Where'd you find her? ...Ow, hey, don't hit me! I was just curious! Geez... Anyway, Hakkai's waiting, so let's get going. ...Oh, Tohru-kun?"
"Yes, Goku-san?"
"You got anything to eat? Hey, I said don't hit! Ow!"
--TBC--
Um, yes ^^; Again, hope things were clear enough here.
Also, wow, anacro-tastic! Mmm-mm, just love those timeline inconsistancies.
Feedback appreciated.
