CFUD App Plans post
Jul. 27th, 2006 07:50 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
soc_puppet...I said I wasn't going to do it this round. I was wrong.
Moving it here, because the last post was getting kinda full and stuff.
I'm pretty sure there aren't any CFUD players out there, but if there are, who I'm apping is under here, so beware of bias? Still half-tempted to lock this thing.
Ahahahah. Aha. Hah. Apping Hakuba, stfu.
Character: Hakuba Saguru
Series: Magic Kaito/Detective Conan (AKA, Case Closed)
Age: 17
Canon info goes here. Will write later.
App plan thus far:
Hakuba sees "person in a gorilla suit".
Hakuba accosts gorilla-suited person, announces time & date (for the record), explains why he's there (help local police capture Kid, and what's this about a murder mystery?), begins asking questions.
Asks more questions. Stuff about camp layout, possible suspects for various things, do they have crocodile permits, etc.
Gorilla gets tired of this. "Unhand me, you brute! I wasn't done asking questions yet!"
----
...Yeah, I need more content, methinks. And to decide whether I want to focuse more on the hunt for Kid, or on the murder mystery. Or maybe he can ask questions about the Kid and the camp, and then find out about the murder mystery, and ask lots of questions about that when the gorilla gets tired of it and interrupts. Iunno.
Things I need to do:
* Make sure grammar is okay, check for typos, etc. when finished.
* Make sure voice is okay/strong (relatively unknown series, harder for the voters to tell, but I need to play him well for my own concience and anyone who does recognize him)
* Make sure I have enough funny, for the love of Pete!
Edit:
Started the sample entry about four times now, and can't decide which to work off of yet =_= Leaning towards the most recent. Posting the lot of them here, so you can get a look at them, and maybeI can leech ideas off of you get an idea of which one(s) sound the best.
Beginning 01:
Excuse me! You there, in the gorilla suit! I need to have a word with you!
Time: Saturday July 29, year 2006; 14:00 hours, 45 minutes, 27.10 seconds. Location: Camp Fuck You Die. Odd sense of humour these Americans have. I would like to ask you a few questions.
A few days ago, I was contacted by the local law enforcement agency; they informed me that the Kaitou Kid was planning a heist here, and wanted an expert on hand to deal with him. Unfortunately, I didn't realize they meant alone.
Beginning 02:
Camp Fuck You Die, is it? Odd sense of humour Americans have. Very interesting place. A lot of blood spilled around here too, judging by Watson's reaction. All in all, quite a strange choice of the Kid to hold a heist here. He usually dislikes blood.
...But I'm getting ahead of myself. My name is Hakuba Saguru, and I'm here as an expert on phantom theif 1412, also known as Kaitou Kid. I hear that the director recieved a heist notice from him a short while ago, correct? Then I shall begin.
Beginning 03:
What the bloody hell is Kaitou Kid doing, holding a heist at a murder site? All this old blood here is making Watson go batty. And those people wandering around dressed as corpses... Very bad taste, I must say. Still, one can't always choose where one works. I suppose I'd best get started then, hadn't I?
Time: 14:00 hours, 45 minutes, 27.10 seconds. Current location: Camp Fuck You Die, Louisiana. Odd sense of humour you Americans have. My name is Hakuba Saguru, and I'm here at the request of the local authorities as an expert on the phantom theif 1412, also known as Kaitou Kid. I was told that the director recieved a heist notice not long ago, and I'd like to ask a few questions.
You there, in the gorilla suit! Tell me, how big is this place? Are there any large buildings with good updrafts?
Beginning 04:
I've had it up to here with this blasted place. This is, without question, the least organized summer camp I have ever seen. No clear trails, farm animals running everywhere, people dressed as corpses shuffling about--what the bloody hell does Kid expect to steal here, anyway? I expect anything he'd be interested in is either already in the black market or sunk in the swamp. And the name--Camp Fuck You Die? Really, I thought Americans were too prudish to show a man applying a rubber to a banana as a public service commercial, and here they're naming summer camps after lewd acts. I must be getting all my information from the wrong sources.
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They go from earliest to most recent. They've all got their pros and cons, and I may end up having to smush them all together for a fifth start.
From my estimation, a good entry length is somewhere between 250 and 350 words (give or take fifty words). Can section should be about half that. It needs plenty of camp interaction, some hints towards canon without being completely reliant on it, and a good, strong voice. ...I'm not sure how any of these are with the voice, really. Help?
Edit 2:
From version 3 above:
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What the bloody hell is Kaitou Kid doing, holding a heist at a murder site? All this old blood here is making Watson go batty. And those people wandering around dressed as corpses... Very bad taste, I must say. Still, one can't always choose where one works. I suppose I'd best get started then, hadn't I?
Time: 14:00 hours, 45 minutes, 27.10 seconds. Current location: Camp Fuck You Die, Louisiana. Odd sense of humour you Americans have. My name is Hakuba Saguru, and I'm here at the request of the local authorities as an expert on the phantom theif 1412, also known as Kaitou Kid. I was told that the director recieved a heist notice not long ago, and I'd like to ask a few questions.
First of all, I need to know everything you can tell me about the target. It's likely to be a gem of some sort, and large at that. Possibly it will be associated with some sort of odd legend, or is said to have some mysterious property. Secondly, I need to know everything about where it is and how it's being protected. And don't try to hide it or replace it with a fake, he's bound to pick up on it somehow. Our only chance is to catch him in the act. Third, what sort of authority figures do you have around here, and do they wear any sort of uniform? Keep in mind that they may be impersonated at any moment. Watch for any out of character behavior. Fourth--
I say, gorilla man, hands off! I wasn't done asking questions yet!
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Need to know if the voice is consistant, if it's laugh-out-loud, side-clutching funny, and if it's too Kid reliant. Going to be working on a second version next that's more murder-mystery reliant.
Edit 3:
What the bloody hell is Kaitou Kid doing, holding a heist at a murder site? All this old blood here is making Watson go batty. And those people wandering around dressed as corpses... Very bad taste, I must say. Still, one can't always choose where one works. I suppose I'd best get started then, hadn't I?
Current time: 14:00 hours, 45 minutes, 27.10 seconds. Current location: Camp Fuck You Die, Louisiana. Odd sense of humour you Americans have. My name is Hakuba Saguru, and I'm here at the request of the local authorities as an expert on the phantom thief 1412, also known as Kaitou Kid. I was told that the director received a heist notice not long ago, and I'd like to ask a few questions.
You there, in the gorilla suit; you look like you know your way around here; maybe you can answer my questions. First, tell me everything you know about the gem that Kid plans to steal. What size is it? What colour? How much is it worth? Are there any strange legends or properties associated with it? When did the Director get it? Who did she get it from? Is it related at all to this murder? What sort of security system do you have set up to protect it? Has anyone else ever tried to--
I say, gorilla man, stop with the grunting and put me down this instant! I wasn't done asking questions yet!
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Went through with spellcheck. Changed the US spellings to UK spellings where appropriate (I seem to have only missed 'colour'). Still worried about voice, funny, and canon reliance. Will be cleaning it up within the next (half) hour and probably writing the canon after that.
...Still want to put in the banana and condom joke, but am slightly worried about how that would be received. It is historical, but is it modern enough? (For the record, I think it was a mayor of NYC who sponsored public service commercials that demonstrated how to put a condom on a banana, so kids would know how. There followed a huge uproar in the States, and the commercial was pretty much immediately taken off the air, but people in the UK were fairl amused by it, I think? It's been a while since I learned it.)
Anyway, think I have about the right word length even without it, but still want to be sure.
Edit 4:
Character: Hakuba Saguru
Series: Magic Kaito/Detective Conan (AKA, Case Closed)
Age: 17
Canon: Meet Hakuba Saguru, half-British, half-Japanese teenage detective. This stuffed shirt of a seventeen-year-old left his home in London town to go chasing the infamous phantom thief, Kaitou Kid, in Japan. There, he relied on his father's status as Metropolitan Chief of Police to get officers with more experience (but worse observation skills) to listen to him. Upon failing to capture the thief, Hakuba promptly abandoned a dorky catchphrase and an even dorkier outfit, and vowed to be the one to catch the Kid. He currently suspects his classmate, Kuroba Kaito, of being the thief in question, but has no evidence to back his suspicions up.
Hakuba has a somewhat obsessive personality, and has a bad habit of overwhelming people with questions. His prized possession is his pocket watch, which looses only 0.001 second every year, and he greatly enjoys announcing the time by it. He is accompanied in later appearances by his pet Sparrow hawk, Watson, who becomes very excited by the smell of blood. He flirts badly.
Sample entry:
What the bloody hell is Kaitou Kid doing, holding a heist at a murder site? All this old blood here is driving Watson batty. And those people wandering around dressed as corpses... Very bad taste, I must say.
Camp Fuck You Die, was it? Odd sense of humor you Americans have. This is one of the more poorly organized summer camps I've seen. No clear trails, farm animals running everywhere, and the trees are badly in need of trimming. Still, one can't always choose where one works. I suppose I'd best get started then, hadn't I?
Current time: 14:00 hours, 45 minutes, 27.10 seconds.
Current location: Camp Fuck You Die, Louisiana.
My name is Hakuba Saguru, and I'm here at the request of the local authorities as an expert on the phantom thief 1412, also known as Kaitou Kid. I was told that the director received a heist notice not long ago, though I'm beginning to think it was sent by an imposter. Nevertheless, I'd like to ask a few questions.
You there, in the gorilla suit. You look like you know your way around here; maybe you can answer my questions. First, tell me everything you know about the gem that Kid plans to steal. What size is it? What color? How much is it worth? Are there any strange legends or properties associated with it? When did the Director get it? Who did she get it from? Is it related at all to this murder? What sort of security system do you have set up to protect it? Has anyone else ever tried to--
I say, gorilla man, stop with the grunting and set me down this instant! I wasn't done asking questions yet!
--------
Down to the wire. Beta team, go! Is everything explained in the canon section? Is Hakuba's character evident in both parts, and is it consistant? Any mistakes I need to correct?
After this, I think I may be ready to send it in.
Edit 5: Apps sent in. Now comes the hard part. Unless I distract myself. Ooo look, abutterfly moth!
Edit 6: Making this 'invisible' on at least my LJ. Upon re-reading the app, I have quite a bit less hope for it than I did yesterday. Will start work on Tohru shortly, with any luck. Current prediction for Hakuba: 40% or weeding. That is all.
Moving it here, because the last post was getting kinda full and stuff.
I'm pretty sure there aren't any CFUD players out there, but if there are, who I'm apping is under here, so beware of bias? Still half-tempted to lock this thing.
Ahahahah. Aha. Hah. Apping Hakuba, stfu.
Character: Hakuba Saguru
Series: Magic Kaito/Detective Conan (AKA, Case Closed)
Age: 17
Canon info goes here. Will write later.
App plan thus far:
Hakuba sees "person in a gorilla suit".
Hakuba accosts gorilla-suited person, announces time & date (for the record), explains why he's there (help local police capture Kid, and what's this about a murder mystery?), begins asking questions.
Asks more questions. Stuff about camp layout, possible suspects for various things, do they have crocodile permits, etc.
Gorilla gets tired of this. "Unhand me, you brute! I wasn't done asking questions yet!"
----
...Yeah, I need more content, methinks. And to decide whether I want to focuse more on the hunt for Kid, or on the murder mystery. Or maybe he can ask questions about the Kid and the camp, and then find out about the murder mystery, and ask lots of questions about that when the gorilla gets tired of it and interrupts. Iunno.
Things I need to do:
* Make sure grammar is okay, check for typos, etc. when finished.
* Make sure voice is okay/strong (relatively unknown series, harder for the voters to tell, but I need to play him well for my own concience and anyone who does recognize him)
* Make sure I have enough funny, for the love of Pete!
Edit:
Started the sample entry about four times now, and can't decide which to work off of yet =_= Leaning towards the most recent. Posting the lot of them here, so you can get a look at them, and maybe
Beginning 01:
Excuse me! You there, in the gorilla suit! I need to have a word with you!
Time: Saturday July 29, year 2006; 14:00 hours, 45 minutes, 27.10 seconds. Location: Camp Fuck You Die. Odd sense of humour these Americans have. I would like to ask you a few questions.
A few days ago, I was contacted by the local law enforcement agency; they informed me that the Kaitou Kid was planning a heist here, and wanted an expert on hand to deal with him. Unfortunately, I didn't realize they meant alone.
Beginning 02:
Camp Fuck You Die, is it? Odd sense of humour Americans have. Very interesting place. A lot of blood spilled around here too, judging by Watson's reaction. All in all, quite a strange choice of the Kid to hold a heist here. He usually dislikes blood.
...But I'm getting ahead of myself. My name is Hakuba Saguru, and I'm here as an expert on phantom theif 1412, also known as Kaitou Kid. I hear that the director recieved a heist notice from him a short while ago, correct? Then I shall begin.
Beginning 03:
What the bloody hell is Kaitou Kid doing, holding a heist at a murder site? All this old blood here is making Watson go batty. And those people wandering around dressed as corpses... Very bad taste, I must say. Still, one can't always choose where one works. I suppose I'd best get started then, hadn't I?
Time: 14:00 hours, 45 minutes, 27.10 seconds. Current location: Camp Fuck You Die, Louisiana. Odd sense of humour you Americans have. My name is Hakuba Saguru, and I'm here at the request of the local authorities as an expert on the phantom theif 1412, also known as Kaitou Kid. I was told that the director recieved a heist notice not long ago, and I'd like to ask a few questions.
You there, in the gorilla suit! Tell me, how big is this place? Are there any large buildings with good updrafts?
Beginning 04:
I've had it up to here with this blasted place. This is, without question, the least organized summer camp I have ever seen. No clear trails, farm animals running everywhere, people dressed as corpses shuffling about--what the bloody hell does Kid expect to steal here, anyway? I expect anything he'd be interested in is either already in the black market or sunk in the swamp. And the name--Camp Fuck You Die? Really, I thought Americans were too prudish to show a man applying a rubber to a banana as a public service commercial, and here they're naming summer camps after lewd acts. I must be getting all my information from the wrong sources.
------
They go from earliest to most recent. They've all got their pros and cons, and I may end up having to smush them all together for a fifth start.
From my estimation, a good entry length is somewhere between 250 and 350 words (give or take fifty words). Can section should be about half that. It needs plenty of camp interaction, some hints towards canon without being completely reliant on it, and a good, strong voice. ...I'm not sure how any of these are with the voice, really. Help?
Edit 2:
From version 3 above:
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What the bloody hell is Kaitou Kid doing, holding a heist at a murder site? All this old blood here is making Watson go batty. And those people wandering around dressed as corpses... Very bad taste, I must say. Still, one can't always choose where one works. I suppose I'd best get started then, hadn't I?
Time: 14:00 hours, 45 minutes, 27.10 seconds. Current location: Camp Fuck You Die, Louisiana. Odd sense of humour you Americans have. My name is Hakuba Saguru, and I'm here at the request of the local authorities as an expert on the phantom theif 1412, also known as Kaitou Kid. I was told that the director recieved a heist notice not long ago, and I'd like to ask a few questions.
First of all, I need to know everything you can tell me about the target. It's likely to be a gem of some sort, and large at that. Possibly it will be associated with some sort of odd legend, or is said to have some mysterious property. Secondly, I need to know everything about where it is and how it's being protected. And don't try to hide it or replace it with a fake, he's bound to pick up on it somehow. Our only chance is to catch him in the act. Third, what sort of authority figures do you have around here, and do they wear any sort of uniform? Keep in mind that they may be impersonated at any moment. Watch for any out of character behavior. Fourth--
I say, gorilla man, hands off! I wasn't done asking questions yet!
--------------------
Need to know if the voice is consistant, if it's laugh-out-loud, side-clutching funny, and if it's too Kid reliant. Going to be working on a second version next that's more murder-mystery reliant.
Edit 3:
What the bloody hell is Kaitou Kid doing, holding a heist at a murder site? All this old blood here is making Watson go batty. And those people wandering around dressed as corpses... Very bad taste, I must say. Still, one can't always choose where one works. I suppose I'd best get started then, hadn't I?
Current time: 14:00 hours, 45 minutes, 27.10 seconds. Current location: Camp Fuck You Die, Louisiana. Odd sense of humour you Americans have. My name is Hakuba Saguru, and I'm here at the request of the local authorities as an expert on the phantom thief 1412, also known as Kaitou Kid. I was told that the director received a heist notice not long ago, and I'd like to ask a few questions.
You there, in the gorilla suit; you look like you know your way around here; maybe you can answer my questions. First, tell me everything you know about the gem that Kid plans to steal. What size is it? What colour? How much is it worth? Are there any strange legends or properties associated with it? When did the Director get it? Who did she get it from? Is it related at all to this murder? What sort of security system do you have set up to protect it? Has anyone else ever tried to--
I say, gorilla man, stop with the grunting and put me down this instant! I wasn't done asking questions yet!
-----------------
Went through with spellcheck. Changed the US spellings to UK spellings where appropriate (I seem to have only missed 'colour'). Still worried about voice, funny, and canon reliance. Will be cleaning it up within the next (half) hour and probably writing the canon after that.
...Still want to put in the banana and condom joke, but am slightly worried about how that would be received. It is historical, but is it modern enough? (For the record, I think it was a mayor of NYC who sponsored public service commercials that demonstrated how to put a condom on a banana, so kids would know how. There followed a huge uproar in the States, and the commercial was pretty much immediately taken off the air, but people in the UK were fairl amused by it, I think? It's been a while since I learned it.)
Anyway, think I have about the right word length even without it, but still want to be sure.
Edit 4:
Character: Hakuba Saguru
Series: Magic Kaito/Detective Conan (AKA, Case Closed)
Age: 17
Canon: Meet Hakuba Saguru, half-British, half-Japanese teenage detective. This stuffed shirt of a seventeen-year-old left his home in London town to go chasing the infamous phantom thief, Kaitou Kid, in Japan. There, he relied on his father's status as Metropolitan Chief of Police to get officers with more experience (but worse observation skills) to listen to him. Upon failing to capture the thief, Hakuba promptly abandoned a dorky catchphrase and an even dorkier outfit, and vowed to be the one to catch the Kid. He currently suspects his classmate, Kuroba Kaito, of being the thief in question, but has no evidence to back his suspicions up.
Hakuba has a somewhat obsessive personality, and has a bad habit of overwhelming people with questions. His prized possession is his pocket watch, which looses only 0.001 second every year, and he greatly enjoys announcing the time by it. He is accompanied in later appearances by his pet Sparrow hawk, Watson, who becomes very excited by the smell of blood. He flirts badly.
Sample entry:
What the bloody hell is Kaitou Kid doing, holding a heist at a murder site? All this old blood here is driving Watson batty. And those people wandering around dressed as corpses... Very bad taste, I must say.
Camp Fuck You Die, was it? Odd sense of humor you Americans have. This is one of the more poorly organized summer camps I've seen. No clear trails, farm animals running everywhere, and the trees are badly in need of trimming. Still, one can't always choose where one works. I suppose I'd best get started then, hadn't I?
Current time: 14:00 hours, 45 minutes, 27.10 seconds.
Current location: Camp Fuck You Die, Louisiana.
My name is Hakuba Saguru, and I'm here at the request of the local authorities as an expert on the phantom thief 1412, also known as Kaitou Kid. I was told that the director received a heist notice not long ago, though I'm beginning to think it was sent by an imposter. Nevertheless, I'd like to ask a few questions.
You there, in the gorilla suit. You look like you know your way around here; maybe you can answer my questions. First, tell me everything you know about the gem that Kid plans to steal. What size is it? What color? How much is it worth? Are there any strange legends or properties associated with it? When did the Director get it? Who did she get it from? Is it related at all to this murder? What sort of security system do you have set up to protect it? Has anyone else ever tried to--
I say, gorilla man, stop with the grunting and set me down this instant! I wasn't done asking questions yet!
--------
Down to the wire. Beta team, go! Is everything explained in the canon section? Is Hakuba's character evident in both parts, and is it consistant? Any mistakes I need to correct?
After this, I think I may be ready to send it in.
Edit 5: Apps sent in. Now comes the hard part. Unless I distract myself. Ooo look, a
Edit 6: Making this 'invisible' on at least my LJ. Upon re-reading the app, I have quite a bit less hope for it than I did yesterday. Will start work on Tohru shortly, with any luck. Current prediction for Hakuba: 40% or weeding. That is all.
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:00 pm (UTC)(And erm, Late? Hahaha. ^^; Well I am on summer vacation so I guess I can sleep in. Is true the time line thingamies are confusing >_o I don't have a clue what time it is for you. )
(And yes, it is a lot. ♥ Mainly Snarky!Hakuba in Holmes suit, but... Can probably add more variety to that.)
Have you reread the MKs on Knightus's site? (or on your HD?)
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:05 pm (UTC)(It's currently just after three pm for me. I think I'm at about GMT minus 8? And I'm hoping to at least finish a rough within the next two hours ^^a)
(And I can always make my own, if it comes to it.)
Re-read all the chapters with Hakuba in them, at least, and his appearance in DC book 30. Kinda glanced through the raws for the end of book 54/start of 55, but my Japanese is abysmal :D;; (Do you, perchance, know what form of 'I' Hakuba uses?)
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:26 pm (UTC)Actually, I think Dagron's not quite 100% Londoner British is good for Hakuba since he is only half-British and he's been living in Japan for a while. Any British would work well with him...except for the Cockney accent. XDDDD Which would be HILARIOUS to hear on Hakuba, really XDDD
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:33 pm (UTC)because I wouldn't be able to deal with him otherwise.)"I beg your pardon!"
...I'm also going to have to ask about British swear words :D Important thing to know and all that.
*flips frantically through The Original HitchHiker Radio Scripts, trying to get a handle on British humor*
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:45 pm (UTC)Yesss! Hitchhiker~!
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:49 pm (UTC)And the radio version, besides ♥
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:32 pm (UTC)Is 22h30 here. ^__^; Thought you might be afternoon sometime.
And ture regarding pointers. I wonder whether Hakuba would be the type to say "Oh Boy" and "dear" a lot? ^_-
Also, strange thing I noticed while rereading MK and DC recently: It's like Gosho totally changed the character in the Chat Noir case. o_o;
No Deerstalker, nice suit, no pocket watch but a nice Rolex... Yeah what. ^^; Is intriguing...
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:39 pm (UTC)I guess it depends on how polite he's trying to be.
Makes apping him consistantly a bit of a pain =_= I suppose I could app him from early on, and have some canon growing room, but I don't like him as much then. And I think I'd do better with later Hakuba anyway.
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:43 pm (UTC)*sweatdrops* Well, that explains some of the looks I've gotten XDDD
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:52 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-28 08:54 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-28 08:49 pm (UTC)Luckily Hakuba's from a shounen. XcDDD
Although he does look somewhat Light Yagami's
evilgood twin.*And I guess Watakushi is the really old polite and neutral form?
I think multilinguals tend to be more polite in general, something to do with how they learn the language...
(I guess, I know it's my case, (when I'm not overtired and feeling rude,) but well...)
Also, Hakuba's from a rather Posh background, so it concords.
And slightly condescending male. :PAnd he is less moronic in his post chat noir form. *Shrugs*
Go with what you feels best, anyrate.
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:52 pm (UTC)*cracks up* You think he and Light would get on?
I guess? I dunno that one.
Makes sense. Though I suppose it would also depend on how comfortable he is with English.
I guess I'll just go with which app voice comes out best. *glares at app attempts*
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:54 pm (UTC)...oh god...this is such a scary thought why did you put in my head i'm starting to hate you i hope you know...
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:55 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-28 09:00 pm (UTC)...then again, if Hakuba's smart, he'd get suspicious of Light SOONER OR LATER.
...then again...maybe not XDD
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Date: 2006-07-28 09:03 pm (UTC)hide behindbond with Uncle Lupin, can't he?And he might. I dunno, how suspicious (of others) does he usually strike you? It could be worse if he knows Kid is on the loose in Camp, too.
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Date: 2006-07-28 09:07 pm (UTC)XDD Good point. But when he sees Kaito, he's going to zone in on him and probably not suspect others of being Kid unless Kaito ends up disappearing or something XDDD So maybe he won't exactly suspect Light for anything unless he notices that Light is acting funny.
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Date: 2006-07-28 09:10 pm (UTC)True, that. He'd probably keep an eye out if something strange happened, but other than that I imagine he'd only do the usual detective thing. Which means I have to put my memory to use. And then also know when it would be something I would observe versus something he would observe.
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Date: 2006-07-28 09:13 pm (UTC)XD
Yup. Good thing about this kind of RP though is that you can always check your recollection against events your character has been in.
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Date: 2006-07-28 09:21 pm (UTC)yet, does he?Very useful, I must say.
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Date: 2006-07-28 08:59 pm (UTC)They'd probably have a lot to nitpick over on the How (as in, does the end justify the means?), and also the Why...
(Oh good grief, have just had the mental image of Hakuba asking Yagami WHY he kills all those murderers.)
-Read it in one of my japanese learning books (that are woefully discarded). Is the origin of Watashi I believe. ^_^;
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Date: 2006-07-28 09:00 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-07-28 09:04 pm (UTC)Well, it is his early catchphrase. "Why did you do it?"
Makes sense.